Peer Review for Gabby Dietrich

This blog will provide a peer review for one of my coursemates.

The name of the title and author for the project you reviewed

Revised Post to Peer Reviewers
Gabby Dietrich

A working hyperlink to the project you reviewed

An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed

I chose to review Gabby's fine cut.

An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback (in other words, how 

did you help them make their work better?)

I suggested things to further engage her audience and maintain attention.

An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback

I provided global revision suggestions.

One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from

We both did video essays and I was beneficial to see another persons project.