This blog post will provide a review for one of my classmates
Sarah Hansen
Content Outline
An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed.
I selected the outline to make sure Sarah continues to check back to it just in case she accidentally strays from what she wants to convey.
I selected the outline to make sure Sarah continues to check back to it just in case she accidentally strays from what she wants to convey.
An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback (in other words, how
did you help them make their work better?).
I just wanted to remind Sarah to not get so into one subject that she forget the overall goal of the project.
I just wanted to remind Sarah to not get so into one subject that she forget the overall goal of the project.
An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback.
Sarah has a really solid start. It was difficult to make revision suggestions but I think the main thing for her paper will be staying on topic without varying too much from her original ideas.
One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from.
Sarah obviously has a passion for what she is writing about and I hope mine comes through as much as hers does.
Sarah has a really solid start. It was difficult to make revision suggestions but I think the main thing for her paper will be staying on topic without varying too much from her original ideas.
One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from.
Sarah obviously has a passion for what she is writing about and I hope mine comes through as much as hers does.
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