Editorial Report

This blog post will provide an editorial report for project 3

How did the content change when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

Again, I added audio and visuals to further maintain my audience's attention.

How did the form change when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

I really liked my tone and arguments in this section. I didn't change the audio but I did add different visuals during my editing process.

Selection from Rough Cut

Re-edited Selection