Editorial Report

This blog post will provide an editorial report for project 3

How did the content change when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

I added visuals and audio to maintain the audiences attention.

How did the form change when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

I liked the way I formed my rough draft version of this so I didn't change it much.

Selection from Rough Cut

Re-edited Selection