The name of the title and author for the project you reviewed
Emily Bond
Editorial Report 12b
A working hyperlink to the project you reviewed
An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed
I decided to review Emily's content.
An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback (in other words, how did you help them make their work better?)
I think I was able to guide Emily toward a more QRG aesthetic piece. She mentions herself it looks more like a QRG than a college essay now but she still has a little bit to correct.
An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback
I suggested more genre oriented edits for Emily. She has a solid QRG but it could be a little better technical wise.
One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from
I like the clean flow of Emily's project. It's a little more difficult to do that in a video essay having to control your voice the entire time but I can incorporate this more into my project.
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