Editorial Report B

This blog will examine an edited section of my project 2.

How did the content change when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

In my edited version I think I go more in depth on social media and how the veterinary field is effected by it. I think I sound better in my edited version, more into the subject and interested.

How did the form change when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

I added music and some sound effects to this section. I think it makes it more interactive and engages the audience more.

Rough Cut

ReEdited