Peer Review

This blog will provide a peer review for Coby Allred.

The name of the title and author for the project you reviewed

Coby Allred 

Production Report

A working hyperlink to the project you reviewed

An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed

I decided to review Coby's rough cut and make some global suggestions.

An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback (in other words, how 

did you help them make their work better?)

I think Coby already has an idea of more he is going to add to his conclusion but I think referencing his body paragraph topics would bring everything to a solid end.

An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings 

(or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback

I just gave some global suggestions

One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from

I like the emotional appeal that Coby put in his conclusion.