This blog post will provide a rough draft of my final project
Key information about your particular project that you would like anyone who peer reviews your draft to knowI wasn't sure if we were supposed to add specific things from our projects or just create an overview.
Major issues or weaknesses in the “Rough Cut” that you’re already aware of (as well as anything you’d like to know from your editors about those weaknesses)
I realize towards the end the topics are not as in detail but I'll add to them.
I realize towards the end the topics are not as in detail but I'll add to them.
Major virtues or strengths in the “Rough Cut” that you’re already aware of (as well as anything you’d like to know from your editors about those strengths)
I really like the humanness or realness I added to this project.
Rough Cut
I really like the humanness or realness I added to this project.
Rough Cut
Hey erin! Just read your project. I think it's super relatable and also super funny. I was definitely entertained the entire time reading it. I thought the way that you used your blog posts as sources for your project was actually really good and I think I'm gonna have to make some changes to the citations in my own project. Overall I think you've got a great project. I would make sure that you check your spelling and grammar and stuff before you submit, but overall great job :)
ReplyDeleteHi Erin! I really liked your project! I also felt nostalgic when I was writing mine. I agree, I could definitely feel the voice of a real person coming through, you didn't sound mechanical at all, which is definitely a plus, especially for a reflection about yourself! I would say just make sure you dont get too informal, especially when referring to places of business or other nouns that should be capitalized! Also, I know I had some trouble getting my page numbers to transfer over to google docs so maybe you had the same, but thats really the only thing I would say to include when you turn in your project. Other than that the conventions of your essay look really nice and it was a good read!
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-katie